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Thursday, 8 February 2018

Draft My Holiday


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  1. Anonymous8 February 2018 at 09:12

    Hi Charlie Jo your story could use a bit more words and a end ok Bye from Cerys

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  2. Anonymous8 February 2018 at 09:27

    Hi Charlie-Gurl
    You need to work on your full stops, but that sounds like a lot of fun.
    From Sara

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  3. Anonymous8 February 2018 at 09:29

    Kia Ora Charlie Jo,
    Great recount it would be lots of fun playing mini golf with your family.I noticed you didn't have a full stop at the end of your story.
    From Indi.

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